I knew there was something bothering me about this when I first read it. It’s my dinosaur geek from like grade three throwing a fit. The dinosaur you’ve described is Deinonychus, (latin for terrible claw, the things they call velociraptors in Jurassic Park.) But, unlike in the movie, those were probably covered in feathers and not all that fast for a dinosaur (much slower than, say, an ostrich or something.)

Also, that death-claw is probably specifically designed for climbing things. They did tests and it makes a lousy weapon, particularly for an animal that can crush bones with its teeth.

Sorry for nitpicking. Its still a pretty good story. ^-^

(Erm, you can delete that last one, it thought my emotes were formatting and ate like 90% of it) T-T