Comments on: A Better Life

By: Kalasnokov

Kalasnokov — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 00:06:50 +0000

“Sasha tried to sit up, and his stiff muscles protested.”
some lines later
“…their nerve endings hadn’t been formed yet and he hadn’t been able to tell how far he was pushing himself.”
how can he feel that his muscles are protesting if he dont have any nervs connected? how can he move them at all… D: must be wireless…

By: Tonywolf

Tonywolf — Sun, 07 Aug 2011 00:13:59 +0000

Your story was amazing, I couldn’t stop reading it!
The ending was very sad, hope you write some more.

By: c0de

c0de — Wed, 26 Jan 2011 22:37:43 +0000

The ending was very sad, and I wish that it was longer, but other than that, I think that it was a wonderfully written story.

By: Rick

Rick — Sat, 22 Jan 2011 07:27:03 +0000

That’s… wow. It’s so sad, and deeply moving. And that twist at the end… I’d have never thought about how things would be from an anthro’s point of view. You’ve got moxie, dude. Keep on writing.

By: Swift

Swift — Tue, 08 Jun 2010 07:03:56 +0000

Love it.

By: Rush

Rush — Thu, 03 Jun 2010 00:45:09 +0000

Wow, that was really moving. Terrific job.